Space Chimp First Draft

W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.
• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

The dream

In 1961 my rocket will launch into space. I was a young chimp called June they want me to go space to do an experiment. I bring a picture of my trainer and my. My trainer’s name was Charles. I’m going to be sent into space for 65 years to see if a chimpanzee can survive for 65 years. My heart was pounding because there's only 1 minute left. Whoosh! My rocket flew into space. It feels like i’m getting shot in gun and it's getting faster and faster. 65 years later…  I wake up and saw the milky way the stars are shining like a gem.  The sun is hot as a flame. I finally saw planet earth. The earth looks like mixed paint and now I just need to go towards earth. I’m landing and going faster, the parachute pops out on the back of my rocket and I made it.

Terra firma!  

I was so excited to open the door but I can see the ground it was all messy the trees are all broken the building are wrecked. Did the humans do this? I’ve been sent to space for 65 years and they destroyed earth or the aircraft's drop bombs? and maybe Charles sent me to space to be safe. I walked around I can see my home I open the door it was destroyed. I looked around more and suddenly I fell… I woke up I was  in a bed I can see Charles in the kitchen I stand up and look at the mirror I can see myself I don’t have wrinkles I was so happy and I went to the kitchen and there's a lot of food. I was dreaming that I went to space and landed back to earth and saw the earth destroyed I said “This is my best dream ever!”