Challengers Deep

On my last post I posted a poster called the Challengers Deep. Now I'm publishing the movie of the Challengers Deep I'm really proud of my group that we finished . Please watch our movie and I hope you liked it!!

Challenger Deep

This post is about are film festival, we made a film that is called the Mariana Trench. We are working by groups. My group members are Axle, Khush, Brielle. I think we really made a great job doing are films and I feel exited that we are almost finished. We just have to plan it and record our voices and put more pictures we took 8 or 9 weeks to finish it. I hope you liked it! 

The Dream Final Draft

Life Is Short

1.9.2016

Life is Short

We were in a boat. We were going to Mariana trench to see how deep it is. When where in Mariana trench we started to drop the submarine.We started to go down. 8 hours later it’s getting darker and darker here We saw some creepy animals like a goblin shark and angler fish, dumbo octopus, football fish, benthocodon and frilled sharks.

7 hours later.. Our submarine had shaken, I looked at the window the frilled sharks, there's a lot of them, we just went deeper and we made it the bottom of Mariana trench. I said how deep are we are he said 10,994 meters and (36,070 feet) I said "whoa!" Now we need to go back at the top. Our submarine had shaken again I look to the window the frilled sharks they were a hundreds of them, I ran to my friend. I said "Hey there's a hundreds of shark on the window!" He looked at me and said "there’s nothing to do we have to think a plan quickly before the frilled sharks kill us. But were late the frilled shark made a hole on our submarine my friend says Help I can’t breath!! But I can’t help my friend  because he is on the driver seat and i'm on the back of the submarine I tried to swim on the driver’s seat but see him out of breath and I’m running out of breath too 3,2,1.. The phone on the submarine is ringing beep! beep! Beep! They know that we are in trouble because we're not answering they go to the Mariana Trench fast as they could but I run out of breath my eyes flashes before the submarine came…..

Space Chimp First Draft

W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.
• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

The dream

In 1961 my rocket will launch into space. I was a young chimp called June they want me to go space to do an experiment. I bring a picture of my trainer and my. My trainer’s name was Charles. I’m going to be sent into space for 65 years to see if a chimpanzee can survive for 65 years. My heart was pounding because there's only 1 minute left. Whoosh! My rocket flew into space. It feels like i’m getting shot in gun and it's getting faster and faster. 65 years later…  I wake up and saw the milky way the stars are shining like a gem.  The sun is hot as a flame. I finally saw planet earth. The earth looks like mixed paint and now I just need to go towards earth. I’m landing and going faster, the parachute pops out on the back of my rocket and I made it.

Terra firma!  

I was so excited to open the door but I can see the ground it was all messy the trees are all broken the building are wrecked. Did the humans do this? I’ve been sent to space for 65 years and they destroyed earth or the aircraft's drop bombs? and maybe Charles sent me to space to be safe. I walked around I can see my home I open the door it was destroyed. I looked around more and suddenly I fell… I woke up I was  in a bed I can see Charles in the kitchen I stand up and look at the mirror I can see myself I don’t have wrinkles I was so happy and I went to the kitchen and there's a lot of food. I was dreaming that I went to space and landed back to earth and saw the earth destroyed I said “This is my best dream ever!”

My Dolphin Presentation