I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wow vann i really really like your space chimp because i think that it macs sense and now i no what to do next time and can you all so comment on my blog as will cool thank you from Manaia .....
Hi Vann, I really liked your story it was awesome. But I think you have missed some punctuation like "i'm" it's not capital i. But this story was awesome Vann. Keep it up!
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Wow vann i really really like your space chimp because i think that it macs sense and now i no what to do next time and can you all so comment on my blog as will cool thank you from Manaia .....
ReplyDeleteHi Vann, I really liked your story it was awesome. But I think you have missed some punctuation like "i'm" it's not capital i. But this story was awesome Vann. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank You! Samyog for always commenting on my blog
DeleteThank You! Samyog for always commenting on my blog
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