Overfishing - Social Studies

Today in Social Studies, we were tasked to make a lawyer's paragraph about overfishing. Overfishing is an ongoing issue that is currently threatening our ecosystem, along with the life within it. Anyway, here is the lawyer paragraph. 

lawyer's Paragraph of Overfishing:

Overfishing has a vast of negative consequences to our ecosystem. We must take action on the said topic, as it been rampant in all parts of the globe. Countless people rely on fishing as their foremost source of income. However, with the fish population decreasing, fishing jobs will shift, becoming scarcer, inducing people to lose jobs. Our ocean is one of the most significant sources of food and other resources; losing our ocean could perhaps be the cause of our extinction. Overfishing can cause the overpopulation of different species. When sharks were overexploited by South American inlets, this produced the overpopulation of jellyfish; which resulted in unsafe waters for both humans and marine life. As beforementioned, there are vast negative impacts to our ecosystem from overfishing. Such as a disruption to the food chain. As numerous fish are removed from the ocean, it creates an asymmetry that can lessen the food web and direct to a loss of other significant marine life, including vulnerable species like sea turtles and corals. Overfishing might have resolved short-term solutions to humanity's food shortage. Nevertheless, it's the long term consequences that we must now subdue to fix our ocean for future generations.