I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Vann, I like how you edit the texts by moving it around and I like how you described it.I think you should make the story a bit longer. Anyways, how did you edit the texts? That’s cool!
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ReplyDeleteHi Vann, I like how you edit the texts by moving it around and I like how you described it.I think you should make the story a bit longer. Anyways, how did you edit the texts? That’s cool!
Oh my god Vann that is a amazing writing. I like it how you present it. I'm blown away.
ReplyDeleteOh my god Vann that is a amazing writing. I like it how you present it. I'm blown away.
ReplyDeleteThank you! for commenting on my presentation.
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