I Need Feedbacks!!

This term we were reading our novel books, my novel was "Number The Stars!" The author's name was Lois Lowry. But If you don't know what Number The Stars is I'll tell you a little bit. I's basically a story about Germans and Jewish people.  The leader of the Germans thought that the Jewish people were bad but they weren't actually bad. Then the Germans started killing Jewish people or put them into jail. That's the little bit, but we had to make a character traits about the characters in the story, but if you don't know what character traits mean it means that you are telling about the character like their very helpful.

But anyways we made a slide show about our characters, but it's still in work in progress. But the purpose of this is: To get feedback about your character description so you know what you've done well and how you can improve. That's why I am posting this it's because I need feedback of what I should do next or if I should change anything. But anyways that's pretty much it and please don't forget to give me feedback about my character traits. Bye!