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Tuesday, October 25, 2016

New Year's Eve First Draft



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On the last day of the year, the 31st of December, we celebrate New Year’s Eve with my family, my friends and my cousins. We celebrate it at Philippines in my house.


On the 30th of December my cousin’s family and my friend’s family went to my house. Then we played games the first game we played is tag then we played hide and seek and more.


After we play games I talked to my dad if I can walk Roshan Roshan is our dog and  my dad said, yes. So I grabbed dog food and gave it to him. After he’s done eating I walked him outside and put him back in our backyard.


After that our parents made a lot of food like soups, fish, meat, bread, chocolates and more. Then I asked if I could help and my mom said yes. So she let me do the soup.


Once we had finished making food we have to call the other first. After that they're all here so we ate the food. The first food I grabbed was the soup because I wanted to try it and because I made it with my mom.


Finally we’re all done eating then I heard a firework it was very loud and colorful. So we did the same so we grabbed all our fireworks and fire it all up. Then my father used the very long firework it was called judah’s belt then he fired it up it was louder than the other fireworks.


Next we played games again just a short game because they have to go home so we said goodbye to all of them. Then we have to go to sleep too. When we wake up there's still some few fireworks left so we used it all with my brothers.


Conclusion

I was really happy to celebrate New Year's Eve with my family and my cousins and my friends It was a really fun experience celebrating it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Vann,
    your post is really good. But still there's a thing missing, you missed you explanation of what it is about, any way it is really good.

    ReplyDelete


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