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Tuesday, February 20, 2018

Sailing Into The Bermuda Triangle! (Soike)

Welcome back! It's Vann. Do you remember me? I am now a year 7! Yes! Last week all the year 7's went sailing. Like We did last year in HPS, but now I am in HHS and I missed HPS. We rode a bus to get there and the other year 7's went in the double Decker bus. The destination was not that far away. I was sitting with Axle. Also we were laughing like crazy people. Then suddenly we arrived into our destination. The instructors told the teachers to put us in groups.

There were three groups, group 1, group 2 and group 3. I got into group 1 with Jullien and Gerald and lots more. But they were the only one I know. Afterwards the instructors told us to go at our groups and then they told us to get our boat and sit back down. The instructors gave us really long instructions but it was for our safety. Next they said that we had to make a group of 3 - 4 so we went to a group. I was with Jullien and Gerald, then a someone showed up and joined our group and we were now a grou of four. We were all Filipinos which was easy so we can communicate a lot easier. So we started building our boat, it was a little bit tricky because 2 of our group didn't know what to do, so Jullien and I were the only one that knew what to do because we did this last year in HPS. After that we finally finished our sailing boats... Then we sailed along in the lake.

We had to help others to get off the boat because you had to balance the boat so your boat doesn't flip over... Also there was a time when we can swim in the lake and it was really deep and really hard to swim because we had life jackets on. Then I said to Jullien and Gerald. To look down, and we looked, we started panicking because it was really deep and there might be some alien creatures like a mermaid or something below so we started going back...  Then we sailed again and again. After that it was to time to change back in our clothes. It was really hard to change because there were no doors. Then we went back HHS and said thank you to the instructors. Next it was our time to go in the double Decker bus. Then we went back to HHS and I really enjoyed it and I was really tired... But that's all the things that happen and I hope you enjoy! See you next time!




4 comments:

  1. Hey Vann,
    Great post, good title. I like your paragraphs as it gives me a sense of time in your recount. I also really like your simile of laughing like crazy people - I can imagine that! I am wondering if you have thought about the different ways you can start a sentence as I am sure that thinking about this would make your story even more interesting.
    I am looking forward to reading your next post!
    - Miss Morgan

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    1. Hi Miss Morgan, Thank you very much for your awesome feedback. Also I would make my next blog post even better! Thank you again.

      -Vann

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  2. Kamusta Vann,
    I really like your post but I pound one mistaking spelling but it's alright. I still like your work. Good job Vann good job you did a good work.

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    1. Thank You Lars for your comment!

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