The lion's attack!

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

The lion's attack!

It was an early day we were walking along the river bank When we smell a pride of lions, And we walk about three steps then lions jump on the calf, The calf was shouting for help.  But  there are five lions we run to our herd of buffaloes. Then the lions are getting the calf away from the  river and crocodiles appeared and try to steal the lion's lunch. But the lions won. Then the lions got surrounded of buffaloes.We charged them away from the calf the calf stand up a choose.  Not to give up then the lions are still surrounded them and just try to run away from us.