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Friday, September 22, 2017

Partly Cloudy.

This term we have been writing a story about a stork and a cloud. Then we had to write a story about it, so here is mine. I will put the video if you want to understand the video. But anyways I hope you enjoy. Bye!
Partly Cloud...

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Once upon a time, I had a job but only storks can only apply to this job. It is delivering wishes to people or even animals. I looked around the sky, the sky was so pink it looked like it was blushing. The clouds hovered the land some merged, they looked fluffy and enormous they looked like they were shaped as hills. Some storks flew over the white clouds, and they were holding white bags. Suddenly the storks went to there destination so did I. They delivered babies, cats and even dogs.


We went back into our clouds. They were waiting for there next I was feeling a bit jealous to the other storks, why? Because they always get the safe delivery and they are in higher spot. I was with my cloud but he was not like the other clouds, my cloud was grey and he always give me dangerous animals. But I had to keep my job. I wondered what he will give me next.


Then I got back to my cloud I was a bit slow because was almost featherless. I saluted to my cloud being ready for the next one, but I wasn’t actually ready I was afraid of what he will give me next. He swiftly grabbed me and scratching my head with his fist. So I softly pecked him , I said that I was ready for my next delivery. He laughed and turn back, then he suddenly showed a adorable baby crocodile. “Awwww!” I said, but he pounced on my head and he opened his mouth that my poor head went inside his mouth. I screamed “AHH!”  I tried to get him off my head the adorable or the deadly baby crocodile bit my head more. So I screamed again, but thanks to the cloud he helped me get the crocodile off me. I felt relieved but horrified at the same time. He made the bag that he can put the crocodile inside, I grabbed the bag with my beak very carefully and flew away from my cloud.


I finally delivered the crocodile. So I flew back to my cloud feeling very exhausted, I saw him making another animal I saluted once again but some of my feathers sadly fell off. My cloud was shocked so he quickly cleaned me. Then he grabbed me to the next animal, but I slowly backed away from the animal. He magically made the animal alive but the big hored baby goat rammed my stomach with his gigantic hardened horns. I took a very deep breath, I laughed trying to be fine but I looked up in the sky I saw the other storks having a good time. I was feeling jealous then I looked at my cloud feeling awkward but I grabbed the bag but I got rammed again but I still flew away once again.


I was back at my cloud, he showed me another animal but it didn’t seem to look deadly at the other animals. So I touch it suddenly it turned into a porcupine I was so shocked and hurt of its deadly spikes “AHHHHHHHH!!!” I screamed. I remembered that I threw him in the air so I looked up I had to catch the porcupine. Next he grabbed it and put it in the bag. The spikes went through the bag showing the spikes at the outside. I flapped my wing so that the spikes in my wings flew off, once again I carefully grabbed the bag and flew safely away from my cloud.


I got back on my cloud with spikes on my head. The cloud was shocked so he pull all the spikes off my head. Then hugged me. He remembered that he had one more delivery so he rapidly grabbed it. I backed away from it because it was so big and it had a huge mouth. I looked at the cloud near us giving out baby chicks. He gave me the shark, but I refused I flew at the cloud near us.

I thought I heard a something rumbling and it started to go darker I got a little scared but I knew that I would be safe in here. Suddenly I heard thunder they sounded terrible and loud, but It finally stopped. The cloud near us have me a bag, but unexpectedly it sounded it was raining. I knew that it might have been my cloud so I went back with the bag. I opened it, I saw on his face he was confused. I grabbed the shirt and put it on also the helmet. He once more hugged me and laugh with happiness, I was ready for the next one so he quickly reacted. He gave me an eel It didn’t look very deadly but it randomly shocked me, I screamed “Ahhh!” I knew that it was an electric eel but it shocked me again. I went closer to my cloud and laugh...


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